Rough Cut-Miss Miller
The purpose of a rough cut is to gain visual feedback of how the sequence has done so far. The rough cut is the best way of getting feedback because it gains a lot of different opinions that can help the group as a way of making it better through peoples opinions on the rough cut. The rough cut also only can be changed through the editing stage of the sequence.
From the rough cut presentation we got both positive and negative feedback and the use of feedback gives the group a chance to improve on problems that are in the rough cut for example from the feedback that we got we needed to improve a problem within a scene where a group member shouts 'go' that shouldn't be there we can assess this problem by having this feedback and from the feedback we received constructive criticism as we still need to improve the final sequence through the use of sound effects and an eerie sound track that can be used also the credits in the sequence need to be spaced out more so the audience can clearly identify who has done what in the sequence.
We also had some positive feedback through the use of our point of view shots that the audience thought had a unique impact on the thriller sequence and as a group we were impressed by the feedback that we got due to the fact that it can make our thriller sequence to a better standard through stamping out the problems that are in the sequence.
To summerise all feedback both positive and negative is useful to my group for example negative feedback helps us on areas that we need to improve on and positive feedback let's us know where we are doing well on the assignment. Feedback to the group is crucial because it helps on areas that need to be improved and that other areas that we may have not noticed can get improved as well.
From the rough cut presentation we got both positive and negative feedback and the use of feedback gives the group a chance to improve on problems that are in the rough cut for example from the feedback that we got we needed to improve a problem within a scene where a group member shouts 'go' that shouldn't be there we can assess this problem by having this feedback and from the feedback we received constructive criticism as we still need to improve the final sequence through the use of sound effects and an eerie sound track that can be used also the credits in the sequence need to be spaced out more so the audience can clearly identify who has done what in the sequence.
We also had some positive feedback through the use of our point of view shots that the audience thought had a unique impact on the thriller sequence and as a group we were impressed by the feedback that we got due to the fact that it can make our thriller sequence to a better standard through stamping out the problems that are in the sequence.
To summerise all feedback both positive and negative is useful to my group for example negative feedback helps us on areas that we need to improve on and positive feedback let's us know where we are doing well on the assignment. Feedback to the group is crucial because it helps on areas that need to be improved and that other areas that we may have not noticed can get improved as well.
You have provided a basic recount of why we need rough cuts and feedback, as well as a brief summary explaining some of the feedback you received.
ReplyDelete1) Identify all the feedback given (both positive and negative) and explain how and why you will improve on certain points mentioned
2) make sure you explain fully why we need feedback and explain how this has/will help you with improving your sequence
3) Include a summary explaining how useful you found receiving feedback
4) Check clarity of work, spelling etc.